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A Dangerous Affair


He was always frightened when she called him this late. He took the familiar route to her room, his heart pounding in his chest. They had been meeting like this for well over a month now and he quietly wondered whether her husband had any idea what was going on when he was away. Most of the neighbours had been passing rumours between themselves that suggested she was having an affair, some even implied she was unwell mentally, but Matthew refused to believe it. He loved her, and she loved him. He had to do this for her. He pushed open the door and saw her standing there, bathed in the moonlight which streamed through the open window. She was naked. Her index finger invited him forward, her eyes burning with passion.

The silence at this point was deafening, nothing stood between his hands and her naked flesh. The breeze danced lazily across her nipples, inviting them to stand. Matthew looked on in wonder; torn between his gut feeling that what she was asking him to do was very wrong and an ungodly desire to always please her. He took a step further, for a brief moment he hesitated. “Touch me”, she breathed. Matthew reached out and felt her moistness. He kept his head down, unable to look her in the eyes. “Do you love me Matt?”, she asked. “Yes Mommy, I do.”, he whispered. He roughly wiped away the tears that stung his face as he slipped a finger inside her.

To Be Continued… I hope.

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17 responses

  1. um eww

    May 20, 2012 at 10:52 pm

  2. G

    a wah di bloodclAAT dis?

    May 20, 2012 at 11:32 pm

  3. Tatiana Answer

    risky subject

    May 20, 2012 at 11:36 pm

  4. Tell

    WOW! I did not see that coming.

    May 21, 2012 at 2:25 am

  5. Brian

    And the judgement begins lol smh I hope you continue…

    May 21, 2012 at 10:02 am

  6. Clovene

    Oh dear… I admire ur bravery….

    May 21, 2012 at 11:07 am

  7. syntax error does not compute

    May 21, 2012 at 2:38 pm

  8. lateisha1100

    Wth… Listen mi…. mek sure mi read the rest tomorrow!!!!

    May 21, 2012 at 2:43 pm

  9. “Yes Mommy,I do”….this is INSANITY!

    May 21, 2012 at 8:43 pm

  10. silence at this point was deafening

    Cliche. Made the mood less serious.

    Story overall was good. Very good. Mother son incest is indeed a touchy topic to pull off. Can you make the story compelling without making the story into a lurid, pornographic story? Time will tell.

    May 22, 2012 at 1:24 pm

  11. Floydie

    The Blooody Hell 0.o That definitely caught me off guard there. Onto part 2 as my excitement builds

    May 23, 2012 at 3:03 am

  12. Latty Berry

    I so did not see that coming….. I was on the edge of my seat to the point where Matthew said mommy…..I crawled back to my chair in disgust. Good twist tho

    June 11, 2012 at 1:17 pm

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